Draft Front Cover

In evaluation for my front cover i am going to change the title with the picture for a female sign with a normal 'o' else it implies that the magazine is only for women although it is based for a female audience males may still be interested. I am going to change my photo so that my model is facing towards and looking straight on at the camera to give a more powerful effect upon the reader as they will be making eye contact. the 'Lucy Quote' is however too high up on the page and it is on the models face so as a result i will be moving it further down. I have included a plan in which helped me out as i then could follow it and add little details as i went along, this plan was inspired by a previous NME magazine which i have analysed. 

Draft Contents Page

In my final draft i will need to include another artist and band as my magazine wont all be based on just one artist; however the 'Lucy' model is the main feature. I will also have to include photos of an ipod or iphone to include on my advertising, also i will make sure the cover lines are relevant to the picture or purpose it is covering. I will also place the title of the magazine on the contents and double page spread pages as they are where they belong. 

Draft Double Page Spread

In evaluation i think i need to change my background as the image blends in with it too much. Maybe also edit the picture more to have the colour pink on her lips and nails. I will change the colour and font of the article questions in comparison to the answer just so they stand out more. I will also change where the photoshoot advertising goes as it looks random where it is placed. Overall i am going to change the background colour and the layout.